Monday, September 29, 2014

Author's note on my Vignette.



When I first started writing my vignette piece I immediately became stuck.  Professor Dragan instructed us to keep it short and simply. He advised us stay away from any topic that was sad or dealt with death. I tend to do my own thing when it comes to writing, so I wrote about death anyways. However, I put a spin on it. Two weeks ago, I found out that one of my old preschool students had passed away. I couldn't believe it. So I decided to write about attending his wake. Throughout, my piece I distract myself from coming to terms with his death by pointing out things that really didn't matter. Like how the sign in book had white pages with blue lines and how there were black folding chairs. Reading my piece it’s clear that I was in denial of his death. Writing this kind of piece in general was hard because of the word limit, choice of topic, what to title it and how to end it.  However I am satisfied with the way I choice to write the story, it captures how I felt in the moment. I called my piece September 19th because that was the day I attended the wake.



Here's a glimpse of my piece.

September 19th
                Upon entering the slightly dimmed room, to my left there was a book that rested on a desk that read at the top "Friends and Family."  I thought to myself where do I actually fall since I was neither. The book had white pages with blue lines; each line had a number next to it. I skimmed through the book briefly searching for familiar names. There were none. I contemplated what to say. Should I talk about how on my very first day as your preschool teacher you pulled my hair? Or that time I tried to make you eat your vegetables during lunch and you screamed out "You're fired Miss. Dominique!" Or the countless times you refused to line up when it was time to leave the park. Or how that one time you told me I was your french-fry made up for all the times you made my job impossible. French fries were your favorite and, at the moment, I was too. I kept it simply number 89 –“With love Miss. Dominique (First Steps Academy) ".

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